notes

1) the sales clerk at Louie's Lamps needs to be more persistent, more obnoxious

2) manifestation #2 - i'm not satisified with his dialog

3) insert another day between day one (nicky's new) and day three (now, maintenance/bobby boozer day) on day two he has a white-collar job, inside a downtown office building labeled New Town Corp. He goes first to the rooftop where we see all the rooftops are packed with solar panels and water tanks. he checks some gauges and taps into a handheld device. then he goes down a couple of floors and into a fancy office where he sits behind a desk, reads a stack of reports, and enters some information into a computer terminal. then he goes down to the ground level and enters a large factory room, where several settlers are operating machinery, out of which comes a torrent of random products (meats, toys, clothing, tools) which arrive all packaged and shrinkwrapped and roll on conveyor belts to shipping docks, where other settlers are sorting them into delivery vans. Billy talks to one or two of the workers and taps some more into his handheld device.

he has no social call that evening but simply works a long day, goes home, proceeds through the ritual, and goes to bed at six

4) the going to bed ritual must be made consistent - he must enter the bathroom on each of the first few nights and emerge wearing those pajamas again, just as in the morning he enters it wearing the pajamas and leaves wearing the suit